Hello everyone, here are my Volcanoes of Auckland writing slides. I have written story about a girl and her friend named Lilly, they experience a volcanic eruption at Rangitoto.
I found it really fun when I was making my slides.
Have you done anything like this yet?
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Kia ora Kapiri, Wow that was an exciting story! I liked the way you built up the danger as it went. Next time you could try adding some more WOW words to heighten the peril you and Lilly are in. You could also describe how you felt, was your skin tingling, your heart beating rapidly...? I'm glad you survived to tell another tale : ) Megan
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