Volcanoes Of Auckland

 

Hello everyone, today I had to be a news reporter and create my own article. I had to research a bit of information and change it into my own words and description. I thought this was challenging to do.

Have you done anything like this before?

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Word of the Day - there, their and they're

 

Hello everyone, here is my Word of the Day slides. These slides are about the words there, their and they're. They all have similar pronunciations but have different meanings.   

Do you know the meaning for these three words?

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Do All Volcanoes Look The Same?

 

Hello everyone, today I did some descriptive writing of volcano pictures and while I was writing I found it fun.

How many volcanoes do you think are in New Zealand?

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Different Types Of Volcanoes!

 

Hello everyone, here are my volcano slides about different types of volcanoes. I hope you find this information helpful.

Do you know any different types of volcanoes?

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Do All Volcanoes Look The Same?

Hello everyone, here are my slides about volcanoes. In these slides are facts about what a volcano is and what happens in a volcanic eruption.

Do you know any facts about volcanoes?

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My Ideal Park!

 

Hello everyone,  today I made my ideal park slides. These slides are basically about how you would design your own park and make up your own rules for your park. After I finished making my rules I made a picture of it using google drawings.

Have you made something like this?

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Beyond Auckland!

Hello everyone, here is my Beyond Auckland slides. They're mostly about activities we do in Auckland and where around the world we would like to travel.

What are your favourite things to do in Auckland?
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Coin Operated.

Hello everyone, here is my writing about Coin Operated. On the top is my planing and on the bottom is my one hundred word writing, I wrote 265 words.

Coin Operated Link  

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Sentence 1 (character/scene)	In the middle of a bright sunny day, a boy named Daniel and his mum were walking out of a food store.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Daniel always dreamed of going to space in a rocket ship, after a few minutes Daniel spotted a red rocket ship right in front of a store.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	Excitingly, Daniel tugged his mum and politely asked her if he could have a coin to go in the red rocket ship.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	Quickly, Daniel jumped in the red ship, as Daniel’s mum put a coin in the ship he smiled but when it went into the rocket ship it wasn’t quite what he expected.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The rocket just rocked, it didn’t fly into space like an ordinary rocket, at first he was surprised but then he came up with a great idea.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	He made his own lemonade stand and for many years he worked until he had enough money to go to space.

Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above

In the middle of a bright sunny day, a boy named Daniel and his mum were walking out of a food store. Surprisingly, Daniel always dreamed of going to space in a rocket ship. He wore a space helmet with a cardboard jet pack on his back. After a few minutes Daniel spotted a red rocket ship right in front of a store. Excitingly, Daniel tugged his mum and politely asked her if he could have a coin to go in the red rocket ship. Quickly, Daniel jumped in the red ship, he held on tight, his heart was racing fast. As Daniel’s mum put a coin in the ship he smiled but when it went into the rocket ship it wasn’t quite what he expected. With surprise,the rocket just rocked, it didn’t fly into space like an ordinary rocket, at first he froze but then he came up with a great idea. Happily, his amazing idea was to make a lemonade stand and try to make enough money to put in the rocket and go to the moon. As many years passed by he finally made enough money to go to the moon, so he carried all his money to the ship and poured all the money into the machine, but then nothing happened. Daniel didn’t notice that all the money hadn’t gone through the machine. With anger and sadness he banged the machine and the money went through.  Suddenly, the rocket rumbled, and then as the rocket blasted into space Daniel had a humongous smile on his face and happily his dream came true. The End

The Present

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	Jake was aggressively playing video games on his couch.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Jake's mum came home from work but she brang surprise as a present.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	Jake opened the brown box and out jumped a puppy.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	Jake carried the puppy but after two minutes Jake noticed the puppy had a missing leg, he threw the puppy on the floor.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The puppy played with a red squishy ball, he rolled and jumped, getting Jake's attention.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	Later on Jake realised maybe he misjudged the dog so then joyfully they both went into the backyard and played together.

 

The Present,

In the early bright afternoon, Jake was aggressively playing video games on his comfortable couch.Surprisingly, Jake's mum burst through the door and came home from work early but she brang a special surprise in a brown box for Jake.Quickly with joy, Jake opened the brown box and out jump a small light brown puppy. Happily, Jake carried the adorable puppy but after two minutes Jake noticed the puppy had a missing leg, with discus Jake  threw the small puppy on the light grey carpet floor.With no care, the dog played with a red velvet squishy round ball,it was as red as a crayon, he rolled and jumped, getting Jake's attention. Jake couldn’t resist the adorableness of the small light brown puppy, he took a deep breath and let out a big sigh. With curiosity the dog looked up at Jake as he stood up, he too had a missing leg and needed two grey crutches to walk and keep his balance. Slowly together,they walked up to the front door and Jake loudly said to his mum that they would go outside with his light brown dog. Happily they played outside. The End.

The Mum’s Perspective:

In the cold afternoon, I was driving on the dark grey road,the road was as dark as a black chalkboard!I drove past a pet store and thought maybe I could get a cool gift for Jake! Happily, I entered  the pet store and took a quick look around. Surprisingly, I found an adorable light brown puppy, but it had a missing leg. The puppy reminded me of Jake and I thought he would be an amazing friend for Jake. Quickly, I bought the puppy and  put him in a light brown box, then quickly drove home. As I entered my house Called out to Jake and said I was home. With excitement, I said to him there was a present for him. After my phone call from my boss I heard Jake say he was going outside and with happiness I smiled. The End.

                 Hello everyone here is my writing about The Present. I wrote a plan and put some of my planing in my story, and wrote a second story in the perspective of the mum.  

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